Monday, October 13, 2008

peom.

Swinging.
Back and forth the swing sways
my body lain over
slouched.
I wish I had a sweatshirt
but it’s no big deal.
I would be cold either way.

4 comments:

charles wells (cj) said...

sweatshirts are always a big deal!

brittaemily said...

first, totally agree with cj. but yea.. I like it though I don't really understand why you would be cold either way? but i think it is supposed to be like that. i like it. :)

i love candy! said...

i like how you say you would be cold either way. i get what your talking about. i like it.

Ty said...

HI ERIC! :] yah. its good.